Arendohr, the alien world of another galaxy, seems
at first to only be a desert. Indeed, that is where
our viewpoint begins.
Slowly at first, we move across dunes and sandy plains,
fairly low and close to the ground. As we pick up speed,
we also pick up altitude, and are now trotting past
plateaus, then mountains. We are high now, and can see
further into the horizon, over lush forests of BRIGHT
HUES, purple rivers, blue trees, patches that seem,
from above, to be nothing but shimmering pools of light.
Now we are zooming, and are overcome with an all-encompassing
view of a lush world, encircled by an ominous, encroaching
desert. It doesn't bother us too much¼
yet. It is still so far away, and the land so beautiful.
Coming closer to the other edge of this lush area,
we suddenly begin to plummet, into the very depths of
the forest. We race through strange landscapes with
alien creatures, living trees where bug-like plants
seem to ripen and fly from the branch. We fly with one
of these bug-buds, a glowing triad of spheres connected
by twigs, as it buzzes and twirls through the land.
It departs from our company as the forest thins. We
see golden desert ahead, and we don't stop until we
reach a plateau at the edge of the forest, teaming with
small creatures called THE KEEPERS. But, even this is
only a fleeting observation, for soon we are inside
the palace, careening through hallways until we stop
abruptly.
Still elated from the quick, image-rich journey we
have taken we find ourselves in:
INT. A HALLWAY IN THE MENRAHK PALACE
This is where the MENRAHK, a council of alien sorcerers,
dwell.
We are immediately confronted with DEVATI, who is crouched
against the wall in a dramatic pose, her long, spindly
arm propped on her knee in such a way that flaunts her
long, razor-sharp claws. She is a GEILE, one of an elf-like
race with tall, slender figures, whisker-like eyelashes,
ears of a butterfly's wings, and, most notably, deadly
nails that can carve through solid rock. Her tailored
clothes reveal an external heart that protrudes from
her breast, bright blue blood visibly coursing in its
depths.
Devati is a beautiful example of this species, with
swooping, multi-faceted hair that twists about her head
in odd shapes, and magenta lashes that nearly touch
her chin (see attached illustration).
Her fierce expression is what is most gripping as we
close in. Next we watch her hand as she RETRACTS HER
CLAWS in preparation for what can only be murder.
We look beyond the wall and see that the Menrahk are
not aware of her presence; their egg-shaped, womb-like
forms haunt the room, emitting low SOUNDS that are apparently
speech (see attached illustration). They are speaking
to their slaves, who are the aforementioned Keepers.
These small creatures scuttle about with purpose, each
carrying a staff that dons the same egg shape of the
Menrahk, only in a miniature proportion (see attached
illustration). These are best described as back-up life
for the Menrahk, and the link between the staffs and
the sorcerers themselves becomes apparent when we observe
them closely. The Menrahk not only speak through words,
but through the motion of sands from within their translucent
womb. As they speak, we hear the faint SOUND OF MOVING
SANDS behind their voice, changing intensity and cadence
with the cadence of their speech. Their method of speech
has the whiny nature of Golem. Each staff in the possession
of the Keepers mimics the behavior of its respective
Menrahk host; should the Menrahk die, he can be reborn
through his corresponding egg.
We move back to where Devati sits, and see her tensed
for action. Though the atmosphere is gloomy, we are
greeted with VIVID COLORS (hue and saturation of color
will be an important factor throughout the film).
The silence is broken as she mouths these words, full
of quiet fury:
DEVATI
"Death¼
for life."
Her voice is complemented by a noise like breathing,
but close, as well, to the jangling sound of the hollow
beads characteristic of Indian/Hindu jewelry.
Her movement is sudden, decisive. She moves with amazing
speed into the
INT. MENRAHK PALACE - MAIN CHAMBER
taking the small slaves by surprise. From within the
Menrahk, sands move tumultuously, as if in anger. However,
there is only a brief moment in which to observe this
-- before anyone can blink, Devati has efficiently slain
the HEAD KEEPER, whose differentiation lie in the superior
ornamentation of his cloak.
Her swift motion sends the small creature flying into
the wall, but before he can travel too far, she snatches
the staff from him. As we watch, we hear an angry cry
from the leader of the Menrahk, KALI-RAHK:
KALI-RAHK (O.S.)
"No!"
She smashes the staff violently against the ground.
The egg bursts, and we see the sands within convulse
and harden into an abstract, stone sculpture. Though
the scene is quick and brutal, we are held a moment
by the image of the shattered egg. The other Keepers
who possess staffs flee from the room.
KALI-RAHK
"No! Stop her! Protect us!"
The voices of the other Menrahk crowd the room, some
demanding action, others making mumbled comments about
how he will not survive without the staff. Their worried
words are obviously more directed towards their own
life than his.
YUS-RAHK and SUL-RAHK are the names of those whose
speech is most heard.
We hear all of these things as Devati closes in on
the Kali-Rahk and dons her claws before the approaching
crowd of Keepers. Their numbers are few due to their
fleeing companions, and they hesitate before the threat;
though they apparently fear the wrath of their masters
if they do not fulfill their purpose, they also fear
for their lives.
YUS-RAHK (O.S.)
"Invisible thief! Impossible to enter,
it is!"
Devati turns to the Keepers.
DEVATI
"Stay away. My vengeance does not lie with
you."
KALI-RAHK
"Kill her! Hesitate you cannot!"
One brave, yet reluctant soul ventures forth with a
dagger. His efforts are fruitless, and he is swiftly
killed.
DEVATI
"However, I will do what is necessary."
KALI-RAHK
"Awake from your stupor, Rahk. Destroy
her!"
Devati turns toward them, aware of all that goes on
around her. Again, she dons her deadly claws.
DEVATI
"You will do nothing. I will kill you all,
should you try. And I can."
She closes in on Kali-Rahk and gently lays her nails
against the surface of his thick, yet flesh-like shell.
It seems that she is hugging him, but in a mocking,
threatening manner. Her face shows sadistic enjoyment
in a slight grin. Her voice is merely a whisper, and
her words are meant only for Kali-Rahk.
DEVATI
"You have taken all that is dear to me."
(beat)
"Almost. I have one thing that I yet covet.
You shall help me realize this goal before
I can die. Do you know what it is?"
KALI-RAHK
"Daring you are not --"
She speaks no words. Cutting him off in his speech,
she digs her once gentle claws into his skin, dragging
downward and ripping through him, leaving a hideous
gash. The Keepers flee in fear, while the other Menrahk
gasp and moan.
The sands from within the egg burst violently out,
but, unlike Kali-Rahk's smaller counterpart, he uses
his moving, sandy form to engulf Devati. This, she did
not expect. As the sand moves in abstract shapes about
her body, she struggles without hope.
DEVATI
"What do you hope to do, Kali-Rahk? Strangle
me to death?"
KALI-RAHK
(weakening with speech)
"No, Devati. Die you never shall. Keeping
your misery alive, eternity is. Won you
have not – for our live will continue with
yours."
As the sands flow furiously about her form, we close
in on her external heart. Her body is tensing with the
struggle, as is her expression. As we see Kali-Rahk
begin his transformation into stone, her heart begins
another transformation -
her blood is hardening into grains of sand. All motion
stops abruptly once Kali-Rahk dies. He is now a lifeless
statue, as his counterpart.
Devati is captured within; only a few protrusions such
as elbows and fingertips hint to trapped body.
There is a small crevice in the rock through which
she can see; this is also the POV from which we are
looking. She opens her eyes briefly to see the Keepers
approaching and hears the other Menrahk speak:
SUL-RAHK
"Do with her, what can we do with her?"
YUS-RAHK
"Keep her. Prove useful later she shall."
The keeper ritually waves the staff before her, and
the screen gradually FADES TO BLACK as she closes her
eyes.
After some moments of darkness the title screen appears,
the blue word ‘Chrysalis’ transforming to sand, then
to quartz, and finally sprouting limbs, creating a growing
mesh of leaves and branches that consume the screen.
The mesh fades and we are in
INT. MENRAHK PALACE - MAIN CHAMBER, THREE CENTURIES
LATER, DAY
where the formerly bleak, yet spectacular palace is
in a shambles. (Any MINOR CREDITS continue from here).
There are still three Menrahk remaining, and we only
see them because of the daylight coming through the
broken ceiling.
Unlike the once busy room, there are two Keepers tending
to duties, lifeless and no longer carrying staffs. An
air of decay fills the air and the COLORS ARE MUTED
(as they shall be in scenes depicting the present, until
ACT 4).
One OLD KEEPER enters the room and bows with difficulty
before the remaining Menrahk.
OLD KEEPER
"An Araknesh is here to see you, Lords."
They mumble in low tones of surprise. The voice that
finally responds comes from the oldest, in an aged voice.
YUS-RAHK
"You did see him with your own eyes?"
OLD KEEPER
"Yes, Lord."
YUS-RAHK
"Is he alone?"
The Old Keeper nods silently.
YUS-RAHK
"Send him in, then."
While the Old Keeper exits to his task, we move to
the other two keepers and hear one called JOLI mumble
to the other:
JOLI
"I thought all Araknesh had been destroyed
by the Menrahk¼
"
As the keeper speaks (or any other henceforth) there
is a barely discernible sound accenting his speech,
as with the Menrahk. One who pays close attention can
recognize the sound of rattling chains.
The second keeper responds to his comment with a shrug
of the shoulders; it is a perplexing incident for everyone.
To add to the air of mystery, we see the shadow of a
form haunt the doorway. It only hints at the figure
of a large, spider-like creature.
His name is HURLESQUE. Silhouettes of his four arms
dance fluidly as his soft, yet commanding voice is heard.
The voice seems to resonate, as if he is chanting "OM"
with his very words.
HURLESQUE
"Council of the Menrahk."
YUS-RAHK
"Arachnesh. Calling yourself Hurlesque."
The two keepers look to each other in shock at the
Menrahk's ability to identify the creature. Hurlesque
continues to stand in the shadows.
HURLESQUE
"Yes, you know me. I’m quite alive, despite
your efforts."
YUS-RAHK
"Knowing what you speak of, we are not.
Efforts? No such efforts have been made."
HURLESQUE
"Very well. I have not come to extract
truth from you, but to leave a message."
YUS-RAHK
"Speak, then."
HURLESQUE
"Must I say it? You know already what I
have to say."
(beat)
"But I will, to remind you."
Though we cannot see Hurlesque's face, we see a CLOSE-UP
OF HIS HAND, where he is toying with a handful of SAND.
We pause as we notice a piece of QUARTZ rolling amongst
the grains. The camera CUTS to the group of Menrahk.
YUS-RAHK
"Relay your message, Arachnesh."
As he speaks, he throws the sands out, his hand and
long arm illuminated as they escape the shadows. Taking
their slowed trip to the ground, the sands change.
When they hit the earth, they are pebbles.
HURLESQUE (O.S.)
"The sands will turn to stone."
We watch them ROLL across the ground, and are caught
up in the motion of the piece of quartz. The Menrahk
do not notice as this semi-precious stone ceases its
motion at the base of the sculpture where Devati is
held prisoner.
It GLOWS a brief moment before the CAMERA RETURNS TO
an image of Hurlesque's retreating shadow. We hear no
sound of footsteps as his shadow moves down the hallway
and disappears. Silence pervades the room for a few
moments before one of the other Menrahk, OHN-RAHK, speaks.
OHN-RAHK
"Living still! It is an ill omen!"
YUS-RAHK
"Be silent! Make our own omens, we do.
And making our own destiny, we are."
The third Menrahk, SUL-RAHK, participates in the conversation:
SUL-RAHK
"So, he is living. Amending must be done."
YUS-RAHK
"Finding a use for our Geile, yes we are."
SUL-RAHK
"Carry out such a task? She will never
do."
YUS-RAHK
"Quite contrary. Remembering nothing; convince
her we can. Willing. She will be willing
then."
(beat)
"After all, Hurlesque and his people are
destroying of her life and her people, are
not they?"
His comment is met with sounds of comprehension.
YUS-RAHK
"Release the Geile!"
A few Keepers scuttle to the cause with chisels. As
they begin the task of releasing her from her stone
prison, the CAMERA MOVES DOWN to where the piece of
quartz lay. It glows, catching the eye of one of the
Keepers.
As he bends over to pick it up, we see past his unique
blue cloak (important later) and realize that he is
very old - four hundred and twenty-four years old, to
be precise. His name is FILLITT. He looks at the stone
with carefully hidden glances, then glances at the doorway
where Hurlesque once stood.
The crystal stops glowing and he pockets it, continuing
to work in silence, as do the other Keepers. We then
CUT to:
INT. MENRAHK PALACE, SMALL CHAMBER - DAY
where Devati's body lies on an altar-like stone. She
is still unconscious. We watch from behind as a tall,
slender creature called a LOJIEZ walks slowly into the
room. He seems an elegant, yet convoluted mass of golden-touched
blue tubing, except for his face, which is more simplified,
as well as strikingly beautiful and serene. The creature
is wearing a blue cape about his shoulders, and a tattered
pair of pants.
As he approaches Devati's form, he pauses a moment
to retrieve something from his pocket. He holds in his
hand a piece of quartz. It GLOWS, almost as if it recognizes
this creature - it is
Fillitt, in another form. He mumbles these words as
he toys with the stone:
FILLITT
"I remember. Powerful Geile¼
it was long ago."
He glances up at her body.
FILLIT
"I cannot help you¼
but maybe someone else already is."
(beat)
Fillitt completes his journey to her unconscious figure
and gives her a once-over. Stealthily, he places the
quartz in her pocket before pulling a bag of sand from
his pocket. As he sprinkles some of the sand over her,
he mumbles some words.
She begins to awaken, with difficulty. She is in some
physical pain, but she overcomes it quickly. Staring
at Fillitt with a confused expression, she manages to
sit up. She is examining her surroundings with a disturbing
lack of recognition. When she does not venture to speak,
Fillitt breaks the silence:
FILLITT
"You have been in the unwaking slumber
for many seasons, now. We were not sure
you would ever escape the sleep. How do
you feel?"
She observes her hands as one who has never seen their
own hands before, then gives Fillitt a side-long glance
that more than convinces us that she awoke on the wrong
side of the bed.
DEVATI
"Like I slept on a tree branch for a hundred
cycles."
Fillit chuckles with slight discomfort, cautiously
watching her behavior. Does she know what happened after
all? He does not see any motions toward violence; she
merely moves to a seated position and stretches, showing
signs of both pain and relief.
She continues on in silence, making no efforts toward
conversation.
Finally, she turns her gaze toward Fillitt. He smiles
as if happily waiting to respond to any questions. When
several moments pass with her same silent, cryptic stare,
he begins to speak, obviously nervous due to her odd
behavior:
FILLITT
(coughs)
"Er, well, yes¼
"
(beat)
"We’ve been caring for you for some
time, now. Do you remember how you got here?"
Devati considers the question, and her expression softens;
it is apparent that she has no clue to how she got there,
and does not know many other things.
DEVATI
"No. Tell me."
FILLITT
"There was a great war that came to our
territory. You were with the other Geile
when you were taken down. All of the others
were slaughtered."
(beat)
"When the battle was over, my people and
I went to find survivors. You were the only
one. Apparently you had fallen unconscious,
and they hadn't realized you were still
alive."
DEVATI
"They?"
FILLITT
"The Dawndi."
(beat)
"We took you in, and, though your
wounds healed, you never awoke."
(beat)
"Er, well, but you’re awake now."
He waits for a response and continues when there
is none.
FILLITT
"I live here with a handful of others of
my kind. We live with the Menrahk, our allies.
Their magic healed you."
DEVATI
"Who are the Geile and the Menrahk?"
FILLITT
"Oh¼ Can
you remember anything?"
Devati responds by curtly shaking her head.
FILLITT
(sincerely distressed)
"What a terrible shame."
Fillitt glances uneasily at the doorway, as if being
watched. It looks as if he is debating on whether or
not to tell her the truth. His fear of punishment apparently
gets the better of him, and he speaks.
FILLITT
"Come with me. I will take you to meet
the Menrahk. They will tell you all that
you wish to know."
As they walk toward the hallway, Fillitt asks as an
afterthought:
FILLITT
"Can you remember your name? I don't know
what to call you."
DEVATI
"That is something one cannot change or
forget."
(beat)
"My name is Devati."
FILLITT
"I am Fillitt. I’m glad that we're finally
introduced."
Devati does not speak as the two eventually enter the
INT. MAIN CHAMBER OF THE MENRAHK PALACE - DAY
and stop at a position that is at least twenty feet
away from the menacing Menrahk. The room is conveniently
clear of any of the Keepers, and the sculpture that
once encased Devati is gone.
FILLITT
"The Geile has awaken, Lords."
YUS-RAHK
"We see. Surprising and pleasant do we
find this turn of events."
(stressing the next words)
"Feeling well, is she?"
FILLITT
"Well, except for some soreness and a complete
loss of memory."
Devati eyes them both suspiciously as they speak of
her as if she weren't in the room.
YUS-RAHK
"Oh, how tragic. Helping her we must."
(beat)
"Come closer¼
"
He pauses as if waiting for a name. When she does not
respond, Fillitt offers the information:
FILLITT
"Her name is Devati."
YUS-RAHK
"Come closer, Devati."
Devati steps forward with a proud, steady gait. Once
she has stopped at a comfortable distance, Yus-Rahk
continues:
YUS-RAHK
"What has Fillitt told you, Devati?"
DEVATI
"That I am the last of my kind and that
you are responsible for keeping me alive."
YUS-RAHK
"Ah, yes. Lacking your society, such is
a terrible thing. Alive you are, however.
Life, yes, is precious."
Devati strays little from her mellow, but somehow threatening
consistency in tone:
DEVATI
"I thank you for your kindness, but, under
the circumstances, the kindest thing to
do would have been to let me die."
YUS-RAHK
"Perhaps. However, valuing life, its sanctity,
we are. Your decision to live was not for
you to be making at the time."
(beat)
"But hopeless, things are not. You
are missing much in your slumber."
DEVATI
"How long has it been?"
SUL-RAHK
"Five cycles. Long cycles, they are."
(beat)
YUS-RAHK
"Fate is your keeper, Geile. Surviving
your destroyers… Those who are destroyers
of the Geile…"
(beat)
"To carry on a legacy, this allows
you to do."
DEVATI
"I have no memory, therefore I have no
legacy to carry on."
YUS-RAHK
"Mistaken are you, Devati."
(beat)
"Tell us. Emotions have you? Lingering
intuitions and sensations? Haunting are
they?"
DEVATI
"Perhaps."
SUL-RAHK
"What does your heart say?"
DEVATI
"The first thing it says is that I should
trust nothing you say. The second thing
it tells me is that there is someone I should
punish for my state."
(cocks her head with a slanting brow)
"You tell me what I should conclude from
the combination of these two feelings."
SUL-RAHK
"No, wishing to help you, we are!"
YUS-RAHK
"Understanding of your distrust? Yes, we
are. But it is not we you should punish,
no… Longing has its reason, longing for
vengeance. Intuition, strong in you, is
speaking of someone that we fear, as well."
SUL-RAHK
"Murderous Dawndi, threat to what
is precious. Leading them, Hurlesque
is. Killing of your people, they all are,
wishing to kill us, too, yes!"
DEVATI
(sarcastic)
"Strange for creatures so powerful to fear
anyone¼
"
YUS-RAHK
"Weak in numbers and hated for our neutrality.
But what is precious? Life! Valuing
others, we are, but others not valuing our
life. Protection we need, from those who
would take our life!"
SUL-RAHK
"Asking one favor in return for our kindness,
we are."
OHN-RAHK
"It is a mutual goal."
SUL-RAHK
"Bringing peace to us all."
DEVATI
"You wish me to kill the Dawndi, and
their leader Hurlesque?"
(beat)
"I am to accomplish what three sorcerers
could not?"
SUL-RAHK
"Your people were always powerful warriors¼
"
DEVATI
"That is why they were slaughtered."
A silence ensues as it becomes apparent that their
tactics meant to convince Devati of the fabrication
are not so convincing. However, Yus-Rahk in his cunning
makes a last attempt:
YUS-RAHK
"Devati, avenge your family, you must.
It is your duty."
(beat)
"Duty of the Menrahk is to protect each
other, as well as Fillitt's people, the
Lojiez."
(beat)
"Trusting of whom is Devati? Devati’s helpers…
or Devati’s destroyers?"
SUL-RAHK
"Yes, follow your heart, Geile."
Devati becomes dark and pensive, and finally steals
a glance at Fillitt, a kind soul whose demeanor has
always seemed openly kind and helpful. She looks up
resolutely with burning eyes, and gives her answer directly:
DEVATI
"I will need my sword, assuming I have
one."
(beat)
"I will go alone."
(beat)
"And, if I find that you have lied to me,
you shall mark the continuation of my life
as the swift approach of your death."
YUS-RAHK
"Provide her with what she needs, Fillit."
Fillitt bows and runs to acquire a sword.
SUL-RAHK
"When is Devati wishing to leave?"
DEVATI
"Immediately."
YUS-RAHK
"Very well, then. Hurry, Fillitt!"
Fillitt enters, carrying an old, but beautiful sword.
He hands it, sheathed, to Devati. The Geile slings it
over her shoulder, and begins walking toward the door.
Fillitt hurries to walk before her, and motions her
in a different direction.
FILLITT
"This way."
YUS-RAHK (O.S.)
"Fortune of the Veda be with you, Devati!"
DEVATI
"Fortune is not my mistress."
Fillitt leads her silently through the dark tunnels
of the palace, and they finally reach a grand doorway
of carved sandstone that opens to reveal a bright, and
endless desert.
Fillitt fumbles a bit, unsure of what to say. Finally
he speaks nervously:
FILLITT
"A lot for one day, eh?"
Devati does not acknowledge what she apparently views
to be a useless statement.
FILLITT
"Well, um, I guess this is where we depart."
He seems to fumble again over whether or not to reveal
the truth. When she begins to walk away, he grabs her
arm impulsively. She does not speak, but her expression
seems to say, "Yes?" He looks intensely at her for a
moment before sighing and breaking down again.
FILLITT
"Nothing. It's just that¼
I’m glad that you have awakened. I've always
wanted to know what you were like. I wanted
to see the spirit behind the face. I always
suspected it was strong."
(beat)
"I do not believe in Fortune, either.
But I hope you use your strength to fulfill
a great purpose."
Devati shows vague signs of being touched by his words.
Though she does not smile, he is obviously filled with
joy when she grips his arm in a warm manner, gazes into
his eyes, then releases her grip to begin her journey
across the hot, golden desert.
FILLITT
"Fare well… wherever you fare."
He stands vigilantly until she has walked a good distance
before he finally goes back into the palace. We CUT
immediately to a view in the
INT. MAIN CHAMBER OF THE MENRAHK PALACE - DUSK
The Menrahk wait silently as a creature shuffles into
the room. It is Fillitt, in his true form as a Keeper.